FOUR HORSES AHEAD OF THE GAME
Berry refreshed, berry stained, berry smores
friends behind earflops and bushnoses and stamped feet
Bearing cleareyed shepherd crook above resting snores
forming a watchguard over Littly and Weasley and Henny’s cleat
Boasting a fullout falldown sleep even Croaky-Moaky scores
fulsome for rest in dreams of worms with wings yet to meet.
All stretchy-fetchy into minding mists our friends abide,
waving vapors of scents and goldens and starries so far
from all they have known before the Babe, before the tide
of peace and goodwill and crashing angel tunes at the bar
of their souls waiting to breath a more distant side
from any ribs they had yet to bet beside robe with no mar.
Now friendly wendly muchly clutchly all did sleep
Not hearing or smelling at first any horsing clomps
Now mere smugging wispy wanding horsing keep
Not quite in dreams, not quite in peeps, just stomps
Now thrumming inside heads bearing four colors’ creep
Not so foretold mere weaving of wish for romps.
But hold! behold! no scold! all rolled
As one to kneel then stand then mend the dawn
But for scratchings and stretchings now scold
Old Shepherd and BushyGirl to shush these spawn
As one then t’other leaned looking smells so bold
Old Croaker could not bigger to meet GreyHorse drawn.
“What ho! What heigh! So nigh! So spry!
“Come you now out from rocks,out from sleep
“What show? What blow?What Need-To-Bye?
“Come into circle, Come into us, Come break with keep”
Thus friends fulsome step to offer berry pie,
Thus friends bending to east GreyHorse did leap.
Now on down rocks, now on past stream so oiled
With new found mount to carry some load
Now on across sand, past bent tree enfoiled
With roostery crows and blustery flies en road
Now Henny and Weasley trot by limbs uncoiled
With spring and bounce to jounce a new code.
Yes, a new code, a new mould of form each soul did take
On eastward, on valeward from that old garden
Where once a path walked by evening’s cool lake,
On boastward did friends now march in pardon
Where drying winds did push more east to make
On scratched paths for hooves sent from stardon.
Soon scents of herds and sounds of scolders
Did fall on crittery heads and folksing eary fears
Soon creaks of carts and offaling potmolders
Did fall on flopped ears and stalking rears
Soon dustings so thick and mustings from boulders
Did blind the Crook and the Croaker in tears.
“Oh, what now? what bow? what row we must make?
“Oh, come now, side now, bide now, hide now!
“Oh, skippeling, snippeling, trippeling forsake!
“Oh, come now, ride now, quick now, fly now:
“Oh, forsooth and forsake now we trail to make
“Oh, stretch thou souls now, catch thy hearts now!”
So did friends go out by a different way to meet the East in New Light.
Jan 18, 2012 @ 20:25:28
Morning Granbee,
Loved the post, I tried to accept your twitter follow request but there is an issue on your end for some reason.
Please contactme via my email and i am sure we can correct the issue
Jan 19, 2012 @ 04:11:01
Thank you for “officially” dropping in here at my blog, klextin. Sorry about the twitter mixups. Some of my blogs I follow are not sending me email notices, as checked, sometimes. Snafus on the cyber highway, I suppose.
Jan 19, 2012 @ 04:17:41
no problem granbee, I iwll see if I can get the twitter thing to work again!
Jan 19, 2012 @ 04:19:44
nope granbee the issue is on your end twitter wise…..just let me know when you may have it corrected please.
Jan 20, 2012 @ 01:12:04
It has come to my attention that a couple of the folks I tweet with several times per day really do not need to be “followed” right now, so I will just leave twitter as is for now, okay?
Jan 20, 2012 @ 20:45:07
Sure thing, I was just trying to respond to your twitter follow request is all!
Best wishes!
Jan 21, 2012 @ 23:09:53
Thanks. Be well. Walk in peace.
Jan 18, 2012 @ 20:38:02
Wow! You are truly gifted, Granbee. Thank you for sharing your excellent talent. God bless, good friend.
Jan 19, 2012 @ 04:12:09
Thanks so very much, m and t! I enjoy your blog very much, receiving much inspiration from your posts. So pleased you consider my talent “excellent”. Wow!
Jan 18, 2012 @ 21:38:30
Granbee,
You truly know how to always be unique everytime. The words you use are amazing! Lovely poem. It has blessed my morning 😀
Jan 19, 2012 @ 04:13:40
nightshade, to know any writing of my blessed your morning is just awesome! Bless you for letting me know. Yes, I inherit my love for word tinkering from my maternal grandmother, who invented new languages and dialects as easily as sipping a drink of water!
Jan 18, 2012 @ 21:50:03
Hi Granbee,
I’ve Nominated you for the Genuine Blogger award. God Bless you.
Check it out at: http://nightshade130.wordpress.com/2012/01/17/genuine-blogger-award/
Jan 19, 2012 @ 04:14:40
nightshade, I am so humbled by the great honor of your nominating my blog for this award! I hope to complete proper steps for award nominations later this month, when I take time from working on my illustrations for this series!
Jan 18, 2012 @ 22:21:25
A wonderful message here expressed with such creativity!
Jan 19, 2012 @ 04:15:41
Bless you, dear Laurie, for your kind comments. I am so pleased you enjoyed this post, filling you with wonder for a few moments, at the least! Be well, Walk into the light always.
Jan 18, 2012 @ 22:47:04
OH! that is just so wonderful it is like reading in a new language. I finished my Christmas story on 5th Jan. But your epic just goes on and on! Wonderful xx
” I sit lonesome, all weary down, eyes clothed to see,ear agapingly to the sound.Wondrously loving loppy eared dappled flanks they all set forth in rows and ranks.”
Jan 19, 2012 @ 04:17:38
Thank you so much for picking up on those lines, willow! “My epic”, as you term it, is one that is eternal, actually. We are merely traveling within the framework of first century events that carry with them echoes of the past and visions of the distant future, including us critters now!
Jan 18, 2012 @ 23:07:25
I love the art of your wordings, very creative and the message you convey from each lines truly blessed me… thanks for sharing the love granbee… 🙂
Jan 19, 2012 @ 04:18:26
Bless you, as well, willof! So pleased that you are blessed in reading my posted lines here.
Jan 18, 2012 @ 23:50:19
The lines flow so well that I picture words flowing smoothly like gentle rivers from your thoughts to your pen (or the keyboard).
Jan 19, 2012 @ 04:19:41
Rivers of grace are poured upon my soul by the Love of Our Father, dear fergie! It is only my small task to pour much of it out to you on these posts.
Jan 18, 2012 @ 23:59:16
“Oh, stretch thou souls now, catch thy hearts now!”
And so, Granbee, your delicious brew of words and wisdom do, for us all to drink heart-ily…and soul-fully!
Jan 19, 2012 @ 04:21:01
Thank you, dear bardess, for calling these posts a “brew of words and wisdom”, for I do feel as though I were over a campfire stirring up spiritual nourishment to share with my wonderful writers’ community online!
Jan 19, 2012 @ 07:25:11
Beautiful. You are very gifted. Stretch thou souls and catch thy hearts now. That is very powerful in itself. Its like look deep in your soul and soar. As long as your soul is in line with God your heart desires will be fulfilled no matter how big or small.
I am sure it has a different meaning but thats what I visioned as reading it. That one line just captured me.
Shenine
Jan 20, 2012 @ 01:09:19
Shenine, I just visited and commented and “liked” and selected to “follow” at your blog. Whoo-wee! Thank you so much for visiting here! The meaning you obtained from this post is the one you were INTENDED PRAYERFULLY to obtain! In addition, I had much of those thoughts in my soul as I entered those lines in this post. Holy Spirit is never “off-duty”,is He?
Jan 20, 2012 @ 00:27:02
Hi Granbee I’m back, because I am nominating you for One Lovely blog award pls. check this at: http://willofheart.wordpress.com/2012/01/19/yay-for-the-awards/ thank you so much… 🙂
Jan 20, 2012 @ 01:10:49
willof, I am much gratified on behalf of the messages I yearn and pray to send out for peace through connectedness. Thank you so very kindly for your gracious nomination of me for this award. I enjoy your blog very, very much and am so long I found it.
Jan 20, 2012 @ 02:11:14
A splendid poem a gift you have for eloquence of words. I admire the talent and enjoy the story told.
Smiles,
Rx
Jan 20, 2012 @ 02:18:14
Thank you very kindly, Leylaraven! I give credit to my maternal grandmother for passing on to me, both by DNA and nurture, the gift of word-invention and linguistic “fluidity”, shall we say? I am so pleased you enjoyed the storyline here. That affirms me so much as a reprised senior writer with you younger folk!
Jan 20, 2012 @ 12:46:09
Rose! Your sense of language is so playful it is inspiring. After reading you I remember every sound is up for grabs. Thank you for the lyrics.
Jan 21, 2012 @ 01:26:04
Peter, if you can’t have fun with our post-Tower of Babel talky,talk, you just need to chirp at birds and creak at crickets. That is my opinion; what’s yours? Ha! Every sound IS up for grabs, podner! So pleased you are having fun with these posts!
Jan 20, 2012 @ 13:21:38
you always have lines in your poems that make me smile and take my breath away… rest in dreams of worms with wings yet to meet… i think this is just awesome, makes me smile, makes me think, makes me like how your brain works..smiles
Jan 21, 2012 @ 01:27:18
Claudia, I am starting to worry about you, kiddo! You LIKE how my brain works? Forfend! Seriously, I am more than pleased that you are smiling through these lines of mine. What higher compliment could I have?
Jan 20, 2012 @ 20:52:18
I love the use of language here! So much terrific internal rhyme…reminds me of Gerard Manley Hopkins.
Jan 21, 2012 @ 01:28:10
Sarah! My goodness gracious–Gerard Manley Hopkins? WOW! My muse must be working while I sleep! I just now realized YOU are the writer of the last essay I read and commented upon at Writeitsideways, which I was blogging in even before I started my own blog! I really think you are the best contributor so far at that sight. When you have been fighting the time constraints and self-confidence battle for decades and decades, as I have, it is pretty much of a challenge for someone to recommend steps to help other writers that I have not already tried down into the ground! You have a fresh voice combined with a lot of wisdom, including self-acceptance!
Jan 21, 2012 @ 05:56:05
Granbee, what a delightful tale, with a most wonderful and uplifting message: “Oh, come now, ride now, quick now, fly now: / “Oh, forsooth and forsake now we trail to make / “Oh, stretch thou souls now, catch thy hearts now!” – beautiful phrasing that lifted my own spirits and made them stretch and soar with new life, and impossible dreams made possible. Awesome write that made me smile hugely, I just loved reading this! ~ Julie 🙂
Jan 21, 2012 @ 06:00:54
Whenever I can write and post in such a way as to make one of my esteemed blogging friends “smile hugely with lifted spirits stretched up to soar with new life”, I am beyond ecstatic. What blessings you bestow upon today with your comments, dear JulieCath!
Jan 21, 2012 @ 07:32:46
Simply beautiful!
Jan 21, 2012 @ 23:04:13
Tess! What an extreme honor to have you come over to my blog. Thank you so much for your gracious compliment on this post!
Jan 21, 2012 @ 10:23:05
Dear Rose,
Looks like everyone has snatched the words I wanted to say. So, I leave these poor words behind > you have given life to your words and a soul to your thoughts.
God bless, Eric
Jan 21, 2012 @ 23:05:25
Oh, Eric, they certainly did not snatch the most important words you said about my giving my thoughts a soul with my words. You are THE most eloquent man!
Jan 21, 2012 @ 10:38:10
I can see colorful, rich imagery with this one, Granbee. It seems you have great fun writing and you’ve unselfishly spread your joy around on this blog. 🙂
Jan 21, 2012 @ 23:07:02
Tots, I DO have a lot of fun writing and consider it the least I can do is spread around some joy to you guys (and others we know not of!) with my blog. One thing is for sure, I always have fun writing EVEN MORE after belly-laughing over YOUR posts!
Jan 21, 2012 @ 10:40:39
Hi Rose,
Not only is the message beautiful, but as everyone has stated, your language is delightful and lyrical….I couldn’t choose a favorite line; they’re all creative, profound and magical (as always)~xx
Jan 21, 2012 @ 23:09:10
Lauren, bless your dear, sweet heart! I suppose I am exploring into some partial sub-dialects here with my poetic language. It seems to be called for to express the inner being of my critters! And profound? I am so honored you consider these lines profound!
Jan 21, 2012 @ 21:29:44
whimsical and rhythmic, enchanting… (~_~)
Jan 21, 2012 @ 23:03:17
Thank you for considering this post whimsical–I was concerned it would be too “dark” in order for the reader to still see the basic “dancing” nature of our critterly friends’ friendship bonds and journey. Whew, this relieves my mind! Thanks!
Jan 22, 2012 @ 05:41:28
Sometimes, Granbee, your energy overwhelms me! What a rollicking, dancing, tumbling down the mountain with a song on your lips kind of poem.
Jan 23, 2012 @ 15:48:06
thomas, rollicking and dancing fully of energy is EXACTLY how I would like for us to travel together towards more and more light, more and more peaceful connections.l
Jan 22, 2012 @ 06:08:20
Arrgh… what a galloping trail you lead us on Granbee, and just love Horses, Makes me see just how our horses have played their parts in helping man over the centuries … Another excellent poem Granbee and we have so mistreated our Animal Kingdom too, throughout our History.. Maybe its been enhanced due to the fact I went to see War Horse on Thursday here in the UK… I went with Hubby, all our age group too in the afternoon sitting, and not a dry eye in the house.. .. We have much to owe our four legged friends of all species.. xxx
Jan 23, 2012 @ 15:49:40
We MUST learn from our four-legged friends. We MUST reconnect in much more basic ways so that we can be joined in peace on a planet we must work together to heal.
Jan 22, 2012 @ 10:59:32
“Stretch thou souls now, catch thy hearts now!”–that’s what I like!!
Jan 23, 2012 @ 15:50:27
Caddo, if we stretch our souls to capture enough light. our hearts will be caught in bliss.
Jan 24, 2012 @ 10:10:21
Of what you are possessed
Or by what you have been blessed
I can neither say nor guess
But your work is just the best!
😉
Jan 25, 2012 @ 03:42:20
Wonderful little verse here by way of compliment to my much lengthier lines (sometimes I think, unfortunately!). I could just dance to this jingly comment of yours!
Jan 29, 2012 @ 12:56:58
As I read “Meeting The Four Horses” I have yet been able to untangle the presentation set before me. I was immediately embraced with a feeling of appreciation for the generosity and essence of wording set before me. Definitely different from my own style. But I am left wondering where this talent is born from. The amount of wording and obvious contemplation does leave me in want of thought.
William
Jan 30, 2012 @ 17:12:30
William, my poetry series in based on scriptures from various belief systems, as well as classical literature from ancient times. The four horses primarily came from passages in the Book of Revelations to St. John the Divine, thought to have been written on the island of Patmos in the first century A.D. My main goal in this series is to show how connections and blending of abilities and gifts can cross all political, religious, ethnic and geographic barriers when the participants truly join together in spirit. Of course, many of my posts are first drafts and are being refined and polished before being included in book form to even progress to a second draft stage. The “amount of wording” is still goind to exceed your style, as it is necessary to form word pictures that will speak to as wide a variety of people as possible.
Feb 01, 2012 @ 12:08:50
Thanks for the explanation. I too take interest in Revelation and find bible prophecy ever so revealing. I find my style of writing influenced by my attachment to the book of Proverbs.
William
Feb 02, 2012 @ 02:49:54
I can easily see how you are influenced by the book of Proverbs (the wisdom literature of the OldTestament) and by you are attached to it. Lead on, dear William!