“……such bright clean hugs for sleep dancing!”


 

 

 

 

 

“……such bright clean hugs for sleep dancing!”

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

So now did all friends stretch and breathe in space

Of High Room so wide and clean and glinting all to shine

All in blending stripes as Cuddles patted Donkey brow in trace

Of missing mommy now flowing twixt the two like twine.

 

 

 

“Ah, shush, shush, “did yawn out Ugly Bird in lullaby time.

“Spy ye now Mr. Jitters tipping and toeing in waltz so slow!”

Croaked Crow: “Now ye learns secret of King’s dance so sublime.

“What began as shepherding jitter re-forms for  worship so!”

 

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40 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. creatingreciprocity
    Jun 02, 2012 @ 03:11:06

    As always – great pictures in those words!

  2. willowdot21
    Jun 02, 2012 @ 04:37:06

    So beautiful,”All in blending stripes as Cuddles patted Donkey brow in trace Of missing mommy now flowing twixt the two like twine.” So blessed if love born of mutual need! and then “Croaked Crow: “Now ye learns secret of King’s dance so sublime.“What began as shepherding jitter re-forms for worship so!” So now we see they ones we have learned to love, the unfolks the critterly ones such love such love just grows and grows. Beautiful , beautiful granbee!! XXXXX

  3. claudia
    Jun 02, 2012 @ 05:06:48

    “Now ye learns secret of King’s dance so sublime.
    “What began as shepherding jitter re-forms for worship so!”…love this…the king’s dance..instead of for the king, with the king in worship…

    • granbee
      Jun 02, 2012 @ 05:10:30

      Well, Claudia, I admit I was inspired by the Psalms where King David danced before the Lord in worship. So pleased you specifically enjoyed those lines in this post. Liturgical dance has always been one of my favorite parts of traditional Judaic worship forms.

  4. Danielle Street
    Jun 02, 2012 @ 10:24:23

    Your poems have numerous fans, Rose! You are very creative. I love how your inspiration comes from the Bible!

  5. lscotthoughts
    Jun 02, 2012 @ 10:44:43

    Awww…Rose, I love how you incorporated Jitters and Cuddles into this “dance.” I didn’t expect to see Cuddles, so it was a nice surprise. Thank you for including her! Usually after reading your poems, I feel a sense of contentment and peace, followed by a “sigh.” xo

  6. writinggomer
    Jun 02, 2012 @ 11:32:12

    Awesome Rose, I love this! Very creative with the “dance” 🙂

    Jitters and Cuddles danced round the fire
    Spirits so high in praise
    Dance and sing, praises to the Most High
    Sing you critters, sing you others
    Praise the One with loud voice
    Hold nothing back, give your all
    Raise your paws, your hands and wings
    Praise Him now, praise Him always
    Jitters critters and Cuddles, praising the One
    The Only One, Join in now, join in!

  7. Francina
    Jun 02, 2012 @ 12:49:17

    Of missing mommy now flowing twixt the two like twine.

    great line, Rose .. ciao, Francina

  8. asoulwalker
    Jun 03, 2012 @ 00:15:52

    Very nice granbee, very nice.

  9. Sue Dreamwalker
    Jun 03, 2012 @ 04:27:17

    Oh I am now Dancing also Granbee…. “Dance, Dance, where ever you may be, I AM the Lord of Dance said He. And I will lead you All where ever you may be.. For I AM the Lord of the Dance said He…
    Love to you Granbee.. I needed to remember that Song tonight.. Hugs to you xx 🙂

    • granbee
      Jun 05, 2012 @ 04:24:06

      Sue, that is the exact song that kept sifting through my head as I wrote this post! See how we are connected? Hooray! Hugs back at you!

  10. becca givens
    Jun 04, 2012 @ 14:17:51

    Indeed and AMEN!! “……such bright clean hugs for sleep dancing!”

  11. Author of Christian Comfort & Conversation
    Jun 05, 2012 @ 20:30:39

    Granbee, this made me think of how we mostly think of worshipping for the King but I like to worship with Him, as the heavens open and rejoice. Each and every second and day a dance should be danced because a soul is saved, and the kingdom of Heaven expands it’s glory!
    It does not matter the clothing the critters wear or how slow or fast they go but that they all sing the one song of praise and go wherever the savior goes.. Praises to a God who loves us all.

    “What began as shepherding jitter re-forms for worship so!” – No matter how lost we are but if we just keep our eyes to Christ. No matter our fears, through worship we are delivered because we trust Him. Amen

    A Woman After God’s Own Heart ♥

  12. mtsweat
    Jun 07, 2012 @ 09:20:39

    “…the King’s dance so sublime.” Wonderful granbee! As always, your words are filled with enchantment. God bless, good friend!

    • granbee
      Jun 08, 2012 @ 05:26:47

      Praying for you guys and so very pleased you are enchanted with these words, for they gladden my heart, also! Let us dance with Our King together in spirit!

  13. willofheart
    Jun 07, 2012 @ 10:12:30

    These are the words I am missing from your site my friend, as always great flow…

  14. totsymae1011
    Jun 08, 2012 @ 18:29:02

    You dance at your keyboard, don’t you? 🙂

  15. cottonbombs
    Jun 09, 2012 @ 02:14:34

    Rose! We dance again! If I can`t dance, it`s not my revolution or religion. Thank you for this dance. You got moves!

    • granbee
      Jun 09, 2012 @ 03:23:54

      Hey, Peter, I may be old but I am not dead! Joi de vivre! King David, “a man after God’s own heart”, danced in countless worship services and left us the incredible gift of the Psalms!

  16. becca givens
    Jun 16, 2012 @ 11:39:05

    Croaked Crow: “Now ye learns secret of King’s dance so sublime.

    “What began as shepherding jitter re-forms for worship so!”
    This brings joy and a smile after a very rough week of loss. Thank you, granbee! 😀

    • granbee
      Jun 16, 2012 @ 22:34:38

      So very honored and pleased to be able to bring a little joy and a smile into your difficult week, sister Becca! Our King is always ready to embrace us in worshipful dance with Him!

  17. eof737
    Jun 26, 2012 @ 04:48:27

    I enjoy the dialogue and the back and forth of characters… 🙂

  18. granbee
    Jun 26, 2012 @ 05:35:02

    I find myself really getting a kick out of these characters conversations, myself! So glad you do, as well, EOF!

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