“……Oh, who is that telling us we cannot give up?”
Stoppely, poppely, trammely, scammely friends did go down:
Go down in heaps of arms and legs and noses and ears so warped
As they squeezed into ever more narrow trails to reach a crown
Of glory they knew only by report, never seen yet as they carped.
“Oh, we uns so measely, so weasely wid all dis fallin’!
“Why, oh why, canst we not just lie down to die?
“Why, oh, why canst we not be done, not countin’, so smallin’?
“Weez be better for feedin’ de weeds in dis earth, no more to try!”
Then came whirlwind and dark, then oh-so-bright and still:
The Voice: “Where were you when I made the rocks and the weeds?
“Where were you when I set all these sunrays and starbrights to thrill?
“Where were you when I set this clear, narrow path for questing deeds?”
“Hark and bark, ye knockin-noggin critters!” called down Old Crow.
“Hear now the voice of Your Lord telling of all His Power to hold you,
“To hold you on this path, to uphold you in His Care, all for to show
“His Glory in making so great rewards and crowns for the true-blue.”
Jun 26, 2012 @ 04:41:39
Yep, giving up is not an option. 🙂
Jun 26, 2012 @ 06:08:37
No give-up in you, I can tell! Hooray!
Jun 29, 2012 @ 17:40:57
And neither in you. Amen to that. BY the way, your gravatar is linked to a blank page on Twitter instead of your blog. Is that what you wanted or did something happen?
Jun 30, 2012 @ 02:49:35
Well, something must have happened since I set up my Gravatar. Thanks for the heads-up: am fixing that right now! No giving up!
Jun 30, 2012 @ 02:53:26
eof, I just check my gravatar and it is linked to my blog just like I set it up: under the penquins under “blogger” and to the left under verified services, where my wordpress blog link is listed as “granbee.wordpress.com”, okay? You have to click on “see complete profile” after clicking on the gravatar to see all of this!
Jun 30, 2012 @ 03:00:53
Well, check out the comment you left on my blog. It had your gravatar going to a blank Twitter page… 😦 I’ll check again because that is what happened this morning.
Jun 30, 2012 @ 03:04:07
Am checking out right now, okay?
Jun 26, 2012 @ 06:01:13
We shouldn’t give up but sometimes we need to take a rest.
Jun 26, 2012 @ 06:09:30
Resting IS important–we can then make better decisions with more joy about how to move ahead on the journey. But let us not confuse resting with giving up.
Jun 26, 2012 @ 06:22:17
No no no! No giving up! If we get too tired He’ll carry us. What a cute story to convey this important message. 🙂
PS. Granbee, I haven’t forgot about reading your stories–I got sidetracked with computer problems and then a new job! I’ll be back to reading your stories asap.
And Bobbie (tornadoday) said to let you know that she thinks her comments are going to your spam folder! Arrrgh!
Jun 26, 2012 @ 06:30:53
I have not seen tornadoday’s comments lately! I really do not know why they would disappear UNLESS she is trying to comment on posts over 30 days old. So thrilled you enjoyed this last post of mine about never giving up. We have HIM of ALL POWER and LOVE upholding Him, you know!
Jun 26, 2012 @ 06:22:48
The way of the One is never easy, they is never winding they is straight up and down good! They is do as you would be done by do as you would be good!
Jun 26, 2012 @ 06:31:48
Yes, dear willowdot, a difficult journey with many ups and downs and falling downs, but SO WORTH the “keeping on”!
Jun 27, 2012 @ 00:22:36
Yes this is so true but just occasionally we wonder why we have to travel such a hard road and we pray that the reward will be great. Then I worry, for isn’t it wrong to expect a huge reward.
Jun 27, 2012 @ 02:39:07
“Seek and ye shall find; knock and it shall be opened unto you.” There IS no greater reward than finding perfect fellowship and union through the Holy Spirit with our Heavenly Father–and this is promised to all who confess and trust in the gift of Grace via His Son’s death and resurrection. We are SUPPOSED to seek this reward: it fills the God-shaped hole in our hearts.
Jun 27, 2012 @ 02:43:28
Thank you that is a lovely answer, I love the idea of the ‘God shaped hole!’
Jun 27, 2012 @ 02:47:14
So pleased you enjoyed that imagery from a favorite childhood teacher of mine!
Jun 27, 2012 @ 02:49:53
Thank you, 🙂
Jun 28, 2012 @ 03:37:55
You are most welcome!
Jun 28, 2012 @ 09:39:35
So beautiful. I needed to hear this today. You are so gifted. I can’t believe you read my humble blog. =/ Thank you!
Jun 29, 2012 @ 04:34:28
Jennifer, your blog is definitely NOT “humble”. It is DYN-O-MITE! I am the one who is humbled by your praise of my lines here! Thank you, dear lady!
Jun 26, 2012 @ 09:58:24
It is beautiful.
Jun 27, 2012 @ 02:39:51
Bless you, dear soulwalker for such a supportive feedback here. See you soon at your own blog.
Jun 26, 2012 @ 10:04:36
Wonderful message of never giving up, Rose, and for us to listen to the Lord and let His Light lead us forward~love having you back! xo
Jun 27, 2012 @ 02:40:50
Lauren, loving being back with you guys. Yes, we are to continue seeking and questing until we are rewarded with the Ultimate Light of His love and grace.
Jun 26, 2012 @ 11:39:10
so good that we can fail and get up and walk again…much grace in this…great message granbee
Jun 27, 2012 @ 02:41:23
HUGE amounts of grace will pour out upon us if we only keep on keeping on, Claudia!
Jun 29, 2012 @ 11:18:42
yep…true that…
Jun 30, 2012 @ 02:50:57
AMEN back at you, Sister Claudia!
Jun 26, 2012 @ 13:01:48
Sometimes it looks very difficult to get up and……but yes someone says you can’t fail now, you have to go on till the end comes. Thanks, you share beautiful and meaningful poetry Granbee.
Jun 27, 2012 @ 02:42:17
Bless you, dear sweet Indira for your thoughtful, insightful commentary and support here. Let us hold tightly to each other in our questing!
Jun 27, 2012 @ 12:41:59
Yes granbee we should, your post are so soothing, informative and encouraging, sometimes I don’t find words to comment. thanks for sharing.
Jun 28, 2012 @ 03:40:36
So very humbled to read how many good things you are deriving from these posts of mine, Indira!
Jun 26, 2012 @ 13:15:02
Boy falling down ain’t hard, but getting up, especially in the presence of stares and eyes full of mockery, is challenging. But thanks to God who lets us know that He is our strength when we are weak. Very thoughtful, Granbee 🙂
Jun 27, 2012 @ 02:43:14
As Psalms tells us, we are not to sit in the seat of the scornful. The best way to stay away from scoffers is to keep on trekking!
Jun 26, 2012 @ 14:06:33
you you are always saying so and i am so glad you do …. 🙂
keep going of course you will fall
but falling means you tried
so try try try again 🙂
Jun 27, 2012 @ 02:44:08
Yes, as some of our coaches used to tell us, our bruises, scrapes and scars prove we were truly “in the game.” Marks of honor for us questers, Soma!
Jun 26, 2012 @ 18:37:31
I totally agree with Soma xo
We Gotta keep Going – no matter how many times we stumble – or fall – or both 🙂 xoxoxo
Cat
Jun 27, 2012 @ 02:45:02
Absolutely we are NEVER giving in and quitting, dear Cat! And YOU are such a fine example to us all of this mighty way of living.
Jun 27, 2012 @ 05:05:34
Humbled my sweet ……
xo
Jun 27, 2012 @ 05:09:36
And it is very SWEET and STRONG you are, Cat!
Jun 27, 2012 @ 05:11:54
I am Hoping to get stronger and stronger Granbee,,,,,,,,,,:)
with every little moment that passes …….:) xoxoxoxo
Jun 27, 2012 @ 05:13:03
You ARE! You ARE!
Jun 27, 2012 @ 05:30:52
🙂 🙂 xoxoxox
Jun 28, 2012 @ 03:38:20
Seventy times seven grins!
Jun 28, 2012 @ 03:42:27
:)THAT’S A LOT XOXOXOXO
Jun 28, 2012 @ 03:57:23
You betcha, Sistah!
Jun 28, 2012 @ 03:58:42
YEP SISTAH…..
You are a sweetheart xoxoxoxoxo
Jun 28, 2012 @ 04:00:13
Sugary-sweet, dat is me!
Jun 28, 2012 @ 04:01:26
KIND …..
that is You 🙂 xx
Jun 29, 2012 @ 04:33:07
Cat, a brave, strong and loving follower such as yourself helps me a long way down the “kindness” road!
Jun 26, 2012 @ 23:09:37
There are times (nanoseconds) I think about giving up but that seems like blasphemy considering all that was/is offered up for me!! xoxo
Powerful reminder, granbee. Thank you!! 😀
Jun 27, 2012 @ 02:46:03
Yes, dear sister Becca, we are offered such huge, immeasurable amounts of grace that we are mostly drawn towards the Light like filings to a magnet!
Jun 27, 2012 @ 20:24:41
Knock nogging? Does that mean they were flapping their gums too much. Maybe them warped ears need a little doctor visit.
Jun 28, 2012 @ 03:39:02
Yep, probably were yapping WAY too much, dear Tots! Probably from the Deep South, I suspect!
Jun 28, 2012 @ 01:23:24
“did go down in heaps of arms and legs…” – this post is filled with memorable lines like this one!
Jun 28, 2012 @ 03:39:43
SO glad to have you back here, offering such great commentary support,ChristyB. Eager to get back over to your blog, as well!
Jun 28, 2012 @ 20:49:47
Trust and faith dear Rose…roses for you xxx
Jun 29, 2012 @ 04:32:28
So wonderful to experience the trust and faith along with my great followers such as yourself, dear Jane! I most humbly accept your rose bouquet!
Jun 29, 2012 @ 04:33:22
I love you Rose xxx
Jun 29, 2012 @ 04:35:25
Loving you back, sister Jane!
Jun 30, 2012 @ 09:49:54
Loved this granbee! We always can rely on you to add pleasantries to our lives over here. Thanks for the words of grace, good friend. Your friends make our day! God bless.
Jun 30, 2012 @ 22:11:38
So very, very pleased you are finding pleasantries from these critterly friends and their “doings”! Thank you so much for your ongoing support and encouragement. It means a great deal to me.
Jun 30, 2012 @ 09:57:54
I’m back!!! Quick…hide the comments section!
Loved this Rose, thank you!
Fear not critters
The Lord is with you
Fear not, the road ahead is marked
Walk, run, stumble
Move down the path
The keeper of the path is near
Lets be a goin now
Time to be about the Lord’s work
No time to waste
The days are getting shorter
The end is near
The dark is coming
We must be ready
Lamps filled and burning
Trust in the One
Move ahead
Keep the fire burning
Praise the Lord
Sing His Name
Hallelujah to the One and Only!
Jun 30, 2012 @ 22:13:18
You have just refilled my lamp, Brother Greg, with this terriffically upbeat poetic comment! I have truly missed you submitting your poetic responses in these comments! Onward and upward, brother!
Jul 01, 2012 @ 00:21:47
🙂 🙂
Jul 03, 2012 @ 04:58:26
Brother Greb, triple grins right back at you!
Jul 04, 2012 @ 15:36:34
“……Oh, who is that telling us we cannot give up?” – a good title, Rose, related to the theme PERSEVERANCE – maybe you know, once I’ve written a book about
http://flickrcomments.wordpress.com/2011/08/25/10-philosophers/
“The Perseverance Of The Philosophers” …
Jul 06, 2012 @ 06:08:38
Wow. Frizz, no wonder you and I have started clicking and conversing on both wordpress and Twitter! The elders of my childhood drilled into the very center of my soul, “Keep on keeping on” and “Can’t never could!” Looking forward to checking out your book! Thanks so much for making it easy with this link.
Jul 07, 2012 @ 00:12:57
Stoppely, poppely, trammely, scammely friends did go down:
I love this sentence, Rose..
Ciao, Francina
Jul 07, 2012 @ 02:27:30
Francina, I am extremely pleased that a fine poet such as yourself would love these tumbling lines of mine! Thank you!
Jul 07, 2012 @ 04:28:44
You’re mostly welcome , Rose..the line reads so smooth with the double rhymes in it. 🙂
Jul 07, 2012 @ 04:37:58
WOW, Francina–what a affirmation–double rhymes I did use but YOU are the one to celebrate this choice with me here today! Hugs!
Jul 11, 2012 @ 06:08:57
‘As they squeezed into ever more narrow trails to reach a crown
Of glory they knew only by report…’
Trust, faith, believe we are being guided towards the purpose of our lives … so much wisdom in this journey you share, Rose!
Jul 12, 2012 @ 03:01:03
We MUST seek our true path with great discernment, Diane! So many twists and turns and bordering tempations to distract us, you know!
Jul 12, 2012 @ 05:24:21
My next blog post is dedicated to your message of “never give up”!! It will be titled, “The Day Mr. Maxtor Ate My Photos”… you’ve inspired me, my friend!! Your prose is so descriptive and thought-provoking!!
Jul 13, 2012 @ 05:22:37
WOW, such an honor to have you here commenting on my blog like this! Incredible that this post has inspired YOUR next post! I am star-struck!
Jul 17, 2012 @ 12:45:19
Rose! Of course, never give up! Tonight I am proof of that. I’m back looking for more, even as the last reply was denied me. Keep on being the cheerleader for hope and truth, Rose! The light of your truth and hope shines off this computer screen!
Jul 18, 2012 @ 02:10:57
Bless you a thousand times over, dear Peter, for such wonderful affirmation that I am on the right track spiritually in writing this critterly journey! I am cheering ALWAYS for YOU, dear Peter!